» Comics - An Unexpected Arrival (V2) - August 25th, 2012, 12:37 pm

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Luigi_96, August 20th, 2012, 5:17 pm ( Reply )

- Meet Dee, the one who always freaks out, and Doo, the one who always has to calm Dee down.

Welcome to my new comic!! I'm sure you're thinking, "Oh, great another Cliche Mario/Kirby crossover!" Well... Give it a chance! I may surprise you!

Sprites/backgrounds credit to the various people who ripped them. And also to Nintendo.

EDIT: Also, thanks to MetaFawful, for being my first fan!! 8D

Edit 2: Also also, Go check out the links page!! You'll have to forgive my noobish HTML skills... Oh, and thanks to BrokenBad for helping with it! :D

Edit 3: Do the rating stars look ok to everyone? when I hover over them, Mario's lower half goes behind the comic...

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Luigi_96, August 26th, 2012, 8:30 am ( Reply )

- Wow, thanks guys!! 75 page views in the first day!! ^_^

Luigi_96, April 20th, 2013, 5:12 pm ( Reply )

V2 comment... - In an effort to make the series flow a little better, I'm beginning to edit the first chapter...

Changes: added some narration in the first panel, fixed some punctuation issues, and removed the orange background.

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Nothing's wrong to me, the buttons work fine.

Oh, and the comics great, too.

posted by DarkNut255 on August 25th, 2012, 2:39 pm





 
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I like this start, also I'm fixing my Links page now. Your HTML looks so much better

posted by BrokenBad on August 25th, 2012, 2:53 pm





 
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@DarkNut255: Ok, must just be my dang computer.
And, thanks!! ^.^

@BrokenBad: Thanks! and, I just wish I could figure out how to make the description not a link...

posted by Luigi_96 on August 25th, 2012, 2:57 pm



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Here, we're introduced to Dee and Doo, who will inevitably fall under the "Those Two Guys" trope: Two characters that are A. Always seen together, B. not the main characters, C. usually quite comedic, and D. often prove to be much more popular than the main characters.

A quintessential example of this trope would be Bulk and Skull from the Power Rangers series.

posted by Jarkes (Guest) on August 25th, 2012, 5:48 pm





 
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@Jarkes: you... pretty much summed it up there... o_o

posted by Luigi_96 on August 25th, 2012, 8:25 pm



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I like it, though the plot is being thrown at us rather quickly. Oh well, that's what you like to do, isn't it?

posted by BlagH (Guest) on August 26th, 2012, 7:28 am





 
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@BlagH: I actually have some of this planned out, and the way I'm doing it, it has to be "thrown quickly" or it would reveal something I want to keep for later.

posted by Luigi_96 on August 26th, 2012, 8:28 am





 
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You're welcome.
And I've never seen a crossover where Mario ends up in Dream Land before. It's about time that happened.

posted by MetaFawful on August 26th, 2012, 2:41 pm





 
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@MetaFawful: Thanks, glad to be unique! XD

posted by Luigi_96 on August 26th, 2012, 8:50 pm





 
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DEH APOCOLAPZZ!!!!!!!!!!!

posted by WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000 on June 5th, 2013, 9:58 pm





 
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@WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000: NUUUUUU

posted by Luigi_96 on June 5th, 2013, 10:46 pm



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