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Luigi_96, May 28th, 2013, 5:01 pm ( Reply )

- Yayy a new chapter! With a slightly bigger panel size! (old one was 200x200. It's now 250x250)

How does Meta Knight know Redtro? :O

Also, Probably most importantly, I've been reviewed by Ultimate Yoshi! Go check it out!
http://ultireviews.smackjeeves.com/comics/1745025/re-booted/
He pointed out quite a few flaws I never woud have noticed. So in the future, expect to see better characterization, which I hopefully did a little bit of in this page.

So basically, this chapter will be dedicated to
a) Getting Mario free
b) Fleshing out characters
c) Making sound effects better

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If you post a comment, I'll edit this post to reply to it, so keep checking back!

@MecanicalCH: Well, there's not much he can do about it... not sure what you mean about teleporting though.

@Gigi19972010: Meta's text will be white in future pages. :B
By improving sound effects, I really meant placement, lol.
Honestly, I don't like the thought of making panels different sizes, Because that would ruin the "clean" format that I'm so used to doing. So it's kind of an impasse. Usually what I end up doing is keeping the size, but zooming out if possible. :T

@Gigi19972010 (second comment): Ahh. While I'm not opposed to that idea, Doing it would require a basic knowledge of how much text is gonna be in the page. Which I usually don't because I basically make it up as I go. :I

@MecanicalCH(Second Comment): Ohh, that. Well, only with Nintendo logic could he jump through a solid roof. :P

posted by Luigi_96 on May 28th, 2013, 5:03 pm





 
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so...he isnĀ“t embarrased by not having his mask...and end teleporting? XD

posted by MecanicalCH on May 29th, 2013, 12:17 pm





 
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You could make Meta's text white because right now it's kinda hard to read it.
And you seriously don't need to make the sound effects better, they're already good enough. Really.
And and I think you could make different sizes of panels for different situations, because sometimes a panel is too small for the text and characters to all fit, and sometimes it's too big and there's a big waste of panel space.
So, that's what I wanted to say, do whatever you judge better~

posted by Gigi19972010 on May 29th, 2013, 2:54 pm





 
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@Luigi_96:

I actually meant changing the size of the panels between pages, because of the background, the characters that are shown etc. But if you still don't like my idea, it's fine. :L

posted by Gigi19972010 on May 29th, 2013, 3:19 pm





 
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@Luigi_96: when you beat him in the games his mask falls cut in half and he takes his cape and dissappears!

posted by MecanicalCH on May 29th, 2013, 4:52 pm



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