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Luigi_96, January 21st, 2014, 3:38 pm ( Reply )

- And so ends Chapter 3: New Beginnings. Next page, we start a new chapter and a new subchapter!

There've only been 12 pages in this series that Kirby wasn't in, and now we're about to go a whole chapter without seeing him! That's gonna be weird.

So, Chapter 4 is going to be somewhere around 30 pages, with 3 subchapters. And unlike basically the entire series up till now, I'm actually gonna plan the whole thing out.

With that stuff out of the way, I'd like to say a few things about chapter 3.
A lot happened, including some nice character development for Meta Knight, Luigi, and Kirby. Mario might have gotten a little bit of it on page 56, but he's still extremely flat. I'm gonna really work on him in chapter 4.

We were also introduced to three new characters (Ember[who's pretty much a minor character], Whispy Woods [also minor], and Gordoh), only one of which really has any kind of recognizable personality (Gordoh).
Actually, four. Luigi was introduced in this chapter too, but he was kinda already there.

Overall, I think this was a good chapter. It wasn't perfect, but it answered a few questions, while raising a few more, along with introducing some new characters and giving a few existing ones some depth. So overall, I'm satisfied.

Onward! To Chapter 4: The Mushroom Kingdom! See y'all next week!

Ciao!
-Nashew

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Oooooooh...

posted by Sapar on January 24th, 2014, 1:43 pm





 
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NOW we're getting somewhere!
EDIT: now I'm wondering if your real name's Nashew... >.<

posted by Quirby64_:D on January 24th, 2014, 1:44 pm





 
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@Luigi_96: Matthew!? WOW! :) never had guessed! :)

also...i am with Kirby on this one...that Goomba sure is meany...a huge feast and Kirby isnĀ“t invited? T.T

posted by MecanicalCH on January 24th, 2014, 2:54 pm





 
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what if you ate nashews that tasted like walnuts

also OH NO no Kirby in the next chapter? darn, he's my favorite character so far :P

posted by contradiction123 on January 24th, 2014, 3:23 pm





 
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@Luigi_96: ahhhhh whaaaaat? someone stopped reading this just cause of one character? i wouldn't think one character would be such a big deal, but i guess people react differently to different things

posted by contradiction123 on January 24th, 2014, 3:38 pm





 
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Ooooh.

posted by Sapar on January 24th, 2014, 6:32 pm





 
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@Luigi_96: but so much fun...T.T

posted by MecanicalCH on January 24th, 2014, 10:33 pm



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And this is why we enjoy stepping on those rude lil' f***ers: they got not a thing nice to say, even IF you can easily (and quickly) kill 'em.

posted by Ecaroh914 (Guest) on January 25th, 2014, 2:45 pm





 
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@Sapar: Ooooooh.

@Quirby64_:D: Yus!
And actually my real name's Matthew. Nashew is a nickname. :P

@MecanicalCH: Heh. Some people can guess it from Nashew, some don't.
Oh trust me, this ain't a feast. Although it would be for Kirby. Let's see, Goombas and Toads look like mushrooms, Princess PEACH would probably be mistaken for fruit... Yeah, it'd be a disaster.

@contradiction123: That would certainly be weird.
I find it hilarious that someone stopped reading this comic because of Kirby's personality and he's your favorite character. xD

@contradiction123: Yep, check out the comments on this page: http://rebootedmariokirby.smackjeeves.com/comics/1714465/slowing-it-down/

@Sapar: Ooh.

@MecanicalCH: Not for anyone but Kirby.

@Ecaroh914 (Guest): Okay, because that was censored, I'll leave it alone, but avoid using language like that again, censored or not.

posted by Luigi_96 on January 25th, 2014, 3:28 pm



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jerkjerkjerkjerk... WHO IS THE PROPER JERK?

posted by StS (Guest) on January 27th, 2014, 2:03 am





 
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Kirby: Forever Alone

posted by WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000 on February 2nd, 2014, 8:23 am





 
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How rude!

posted by sconic123 on February 21st, 2014, 2:08 pm



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